A Beautiful Failure

Reflective Memo: In this essay, I wanted to pick a focus that had many elements to choose from and really write about.The commercial I picked did not have too much or too little; as well, the commercial featured something that I enjoy watching: anime.Sure, it was not an actual anime feature, but it was close enough to it to make me want to write about it.It was hard work writing this essay, but it was also fun because I got to write about something I wanted.This commercial helped me go into depth because of all the details that it provided made it easy to get my ideas on paper.The biggest challenge I had was working the essay to make it clear and concise.I also struggled with passive voice.I was able to fix most of the errors and am proud of myself.